From: Joe Wreschnig <joe.wreschnig@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 28 Jun 2015 12:18:17 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: Copyediting.
X-Git-Url: https://git.yukkurigames.com/?p=yukkurigames.com.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=c2a1fa701750264b882036b575e88fc74358cd9a;ds=sidebyside

Copyediting.
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diff --git a/support.html b/support.html
index 35e4577..ca787f6 100644
--- a/support.html
+++ b/support.html
@@ -130,11 +130,8 @@
         We try to support iOS 6+, and Android Chrome (which means
         Android 4.0+). The sites will still work fine in most other
         mobile browsers, but you won't be able to save them easily for
-        offline use.
-      </p>
-      <p>
-        On iOS 6, use the <img src=share-ios6.png alt=Share> button.
-        On iOS 7, use the <img src=share-ios7.png alt=Share> button.
+        offline use. On iOS 6, use the <img src=share-ios6.png alt=Share> button.
+        On iOS 7+, use the <img src=share-ios7.png alt=Share> button.
         On Android Chrome, use the <img src=share-android.png alt=Share> button.
         Then choose <strong>Add to Home Screen</strong>.
       </p>
@@ -167,9 +164,9 @@
       </p>
       <p>
         If you believe we've violated your licensing terms or
-        otherwise misattributed some of your work, please let us know
+        otherwise misattributed some of your work, please
         <a href="mailto:yuuSPAM@MAPSyukkurigames.com"
-           onclick="this.href=this.href.replace(/[A-Z]/g, '')">via email</a>.
+           onclick="this.href=this.href.replace(/[A-Z]/g, '')">let us know via email</a>.
       </p>
       <h2>Other Problems?</h2>
       <p>