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       <h2>Our Site</h2>
       <p>
         Rather than a policy about how we're going to protect the data
-        we gather about you, we've got a simpler plan: Our privacy
-        policy is that personal privacy is mostly good, so we'll try
-        as hard as we can to <em>not</em> gather data about you.
+        we gather about you, we've got a simpler plan: We'll try as
+        hard as we can to <em>not</em> gather data about you.
         We'd also like to help you defuse and poison other tracking
         services.
       </p>
       <h3>Log Data</h3>
       <p>
-        We do basic logging of HTTP requests in order to help maintain
-        our site - fix broken links, block spammers, and so on. These
-        logs look like
+        We log HTTP requests in order to help maintain our site - fix
+        broken links, block spammers, and so on. These logs look like
       </p>
       <pre>78.55.123.218 - - [03/Sep/2014:13:45:06 +0000] "GET /heroik/heroik.html HTTP/1.1" 200 1616 "-" "Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.10; rv:32.0) Gecko/20100101 Firefox/32.0"</pre>
       <p>
         They contain your IP, the URL you visited, when you visited
         it, what browser you were using, and (sometimes) where you
-        came from. This is stuff your browser sends to every site you
-        visit, always. If you think it's too much information, most
-        browsers have some way to stop sending so much - for example,
-        in Firefox you can set <code>network.http.sendRefererHeader</code> to
+        came from. Your browser sends this to every site you visit. If
+        you think it's too much information, most browsers have some
+        way to send less - for example, in Firefox you can
+        set <code>network.http.sendRefererHeader</code> to
         <code>false</code> and install <a href="https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/user-agent-switcher/">User Agent Switcher</a>.
       </p>
       <h3>Mail</h3>
       <p>
-        We host our own email service. Email sent to yuu at
-        yukkurigames.com
+        We host our own email service. Email sent to yukkurigames.com
         <a href="http://mako.cc/copyrighteous/google-has-most-of-my-email-because-it-has-all-of-yours">does not go through GMail on our end</a>.
         
       </p>
@@ -97,15 +94,18 @@
         We think it's awful, too. Sorry.
       </p>
       <p>
-        To protect yourself on these sites, we recommend you use
-        tools to help you browse the web safely and securely. One
-        straightforward and reliable one is
+        To protect yourself on these sites, we recommend you use tools
+        to help you browse the web safely and securely. One easy and
+        reliable one is
         <a href="https://disconnect.me/">Disconnect</a>.
         <a href="https://prism-break.org/">PRISM Break has more suggestions</a>,
         though it's unfortunately-named because this problem <a href="http://www.hiddendriver.com/projects/the-peoples-platform">neither
         begins nor ends with the PRISM program or state surveillance</a>.
       </p>
-      <h2>Other Stuff We Don't Do That You Should Push Other Sites To Also Not Do</h2>
+      <h2>
+        Other Stuff We Don't Do That You Should Push Other Sites To
+        Also Not Do
+      </h2>
       <ul>
         <li>
           We don't run Google Analytics or Cloudfront Analytics or
@@ -115,7 +115,9 @@
           corporate databases.
         </li>
         <li>
-          We don't use Google's fonts; we host them ourselves. <a href="http://blog.milandinic.com/wordpress/plugins/disable-google-fonts/">Most Wordpress blogs are helping Google track their readers and they don't even know it.</a> At
+          We don't use Google's fonts; we host them ourselves. <a href="http://blog.milandinic.com/wordpress/plugins/disable-google-fonts/">Most
+          Wordpress sites are helping Google track their readers and
+          they don't even know it.</a> At
           the very least, demand a cut of Google's revenue if you're
           going to work for them.
         </li>