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       <h1>Mouse Events</h1>
     </div>
 
-    <p>
-      You can use Enjoyable to map input to mouse buttons, moving, and
-      scrolling.
-    </p>
-
     <h3>Movement</h3>
     <p>
       Select the direction you'd like the input to move the
-      mouse. Adjust the movement speed using the slider underneath.  If
-      you are mapping an analog input then this is the maximum speed;
-      for a button it's a constant speed.
+      mouse. Adjust the movement speed using the slider underneath.
+      If you're mapping an analog input then this is the maximum
+      speed; for a button it's a constant speed.
     </p>
     <p>
-      The speed is set independently for each input. You can have
-      faster horizontal movement than vertical movement, or map one
-      set of inputs to a fast speed and another set to a slow
-      speed.
+      The speed is independent for each input. You can have faster
+      horizontal movement than vertical movement, or map one set of
+      inputs to a fast speed and another set to a slow speed.
     </p>
 
     <h3>Buttons</h3>
@@ -59,18 +53,16 @@
 
     <h3><a name="scrolling"></a>Scrolling</h3>
     <p>
-      Simulated scrolling can be continuous like the scrolling
-      gestures on a trackpad, or discrete like a mouse wheel that
-      clicks as you spin it. You can simulate a vertical or horizontal
-      mouse wheel.
+      Simulated scrolling can be smooth like the scrolling gestures on
+      a trackpad, or discrete like a mouse wheel that clicks as you
+      spin it. You can simulate a vertical or horizontal mouse wheel.
     </p>
     <p>
-      To use <em>continuous scrolling</em> check the <b>Smooth</b>
-      button and use the slider underneath the directions to adjust
-      the scrolling speed. If you are mapping an analog input then
-      this is the maximum speed; for a button it's a constant
-      speed. Scrolling will continue as long as as the input is held
-      down.
+      To use <em>smooth scrolling</em> check the <b>Smooth</b> button
+      and use the slider underneath the arrows to adjust the
+      scrolling speed. If you're mapping an analog input then this is
+      the maximum speed; for a button it's a constant speed. Scrolling
+      will continue as long as as the input is held down.
     <p>
       To use <em>discrete scrolling</em> leave the button
       unchecked. The input will trigger scrolling by exactly one line
@@ -79,10 +71,10 @@
     </p>
     <p>
       The arrows indicate the direction you would spin a mouse wheel
-      or move your fingers. Depending on settings this may mean you
-      need to choose a down arrow to scroll up and vice versa. You can
-      also change this globally in <b> > System Preferences… >
-      Mouse</b> and <b> > System Preferences… > Trackpad</b>.
+      or move your fingers. If you use natural scrolling you may need
+      to choose a down arrow to scroll up and vice versa. You can also
+      change this globally in <b> > System Preferences… > Mouse</b>
+      and <b> > System Preferences… > Trackpad</b>.
     </p>
     
     <h3><a name="mouseissues"></a>Known Issues</h3>